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Elementary School Poetry Post Archive




Past Poetry Posts

Winter 09 Poetry Posts

Finding Darkness for Hannah Burge
 
I would gather darkness from
a black sharpie
under my bed
a cave
 
I would gather darkness from
my mouth
behind a star
solar eclipse
 
I would put it in a blow-up beach ball.
The beach ball is green and blue with pictures of
animals.
I would put a green plastic piece in the hole.
I would give the darkness to Hannah Burge
because she has been watching her little sister.
I would find Hannah at her house, in her room,
watching her little sister.
When I give it to her she says what is it? A beach
ball?
 
 By Sierra Lambert, Grade 4, Oregon


PARTNER POEM

If each day falls
If each day falls
 inside each night,
 
 there exists a well
 
 where clarity is imprisoned.
 
 We need to sit on the rim
 
 of the well of darkness
 
 and fish for fallen light
 
 with patience.

--Pablo Neruda, tr. William O'Daly

Ask the Poems for Finding Darkness and If each day falls... 
1.) How does darkness help you?
2.) Is there anything darkness shows you that can’t be seen in the light?
3.) Do light and darkness get along with each other?
4.) Does light make darkness hide? Do you think it’s a game they play?
5.) What does fallen light look like?
YOUR TURN, what poem or story will you write?


Fall 09 Poetry Posts

Silently gliding across the sea,
sea is all that's surrounding me,
on it I feel peaceful and free,
on the mysterious graceful sea. 

I felt like a lock without a key
I felt like a garden without the trees
I felt like white flowers without the bees 
but then I discovered the great blue sea
and then I just knew that it was the key
to the used-to-be keyless lock in me.  

Emma Shortt, Age 10
Oregon 


PARTNER POEM


The Place I Want to Get Back To

     

is where

   in the pinewoods

     in the moments between

       the darkness

 

and first light

   two deer

     came walking down the hill

       and when they saw me

 

they said to each other, okay,

   this one is okay,

     let's see who she is

       and why she is sitting

 

on the ground, like that,

   so quiet, as if

     asleep, or in a dream,

       but, anyway, harmless;

 

and so they came

   on their slender legs

     and gazed upon me

       not unlike the way

 

I go out to the dunes and look

   and look and look

     into the faces of the flowers;

       and then one of them leaned forward

 

and nuzzled my hand, and what can my life

   bring to me that could exceed

     that brief moment?

       For twenty years

 

I have gone every day to the same woods,

   not waiting, exactly, just lingering.

     Such gifts, bestowed,

       can't be repeated.

 

If you want to talk about this

   come to visit.  I live in the house

     near the corner, which I have named

       Gratitude.

 

Mary Oliver
Maine


ASK THE POEMS, Untitled & The Place I Want to Get Back To

 1.  When you discovered your gift, how did it change you? How would your life be different if this hadn't happened?

2.  How do you hold onto or let go of your gift? Do you have a secret place to hide things away, or can you only hold onto little bits and pieces?

3.  What kind of relationship do you have with nature? Is nature like a sibling to you, who you bicker with but love, or is nature more like a distant aunt who sends you the best presents?

4.  Who is still locked out? Can you invite your friends and family? How would you invite them?

5.  What things can you see that were invisible before? What about the other senses, what can you smell, taste, feel, or hear that you couldn’t before?

YOUR TURN, what poem or story will you write?


Spring 09 Poetry Posts

Danger
 
Danger is the lightning in my heart,
The dying weapon used on us.
You danger are the bullet landing and
   the unbreakable tears.
Or the black hole swallowing my soul.
You are the family fights or the homework
   problems.
And even the huge fire burning down
   all existing life on earth.
Danger you're unbearable for me.
    --Paloma Deinum-Buck, Age 9, Lane County, Oregon
 
PARTNER POEM

from Negotiations with a Volcano
 
We will call you "Agua" like the rivers and cool jugs.
We will persuade the clouds to nestle around your neck
so you may sleep late.
We would be happy if you slept forever.
We will tend the slopes we plant, singing the songs
our grandfathers taught us before we inherited their fear.
We will try not to argue among ourselves.
 
Please think of us as we are, tiny, with skins that burn easily.
Please notice how we have watered the shrubs around our houses
and transplanted the peppers into neat tin cans.
Forgive any anger we feel toward the earth,
when the rains do not come, or they come too much,
and swallow our corn.
It is not easy to be this small and live in your shadow.
      --Naomi Shihab Nye, San Antonio, Texas

ASK THE POEMS
1.  What is the most frightening thing that could happen to a poem?
2.  How would you talk to the thing you feared most? What language would you use?
3.  Would you rather know what danger you will be in the midst of someday or would you prefer to let danger sneak up and surprise you? Why?
4.  How might you be rescued by clouds? In what way could they help or hinder you?
5.  If you could make scary things disappear just be pretending they didn't exist how would you remember them? Would you feel proud of yourself or sorry that you had erased such a powerful thing? Why?


Winter 08 Poetry Posts

DARK NIGHT
 
Oh dark, dark night, what are your secrets?
Oh dark, dark night, why are you there?
Are you there to make everyone's despair just suddenly
leave?
Are you there to make one happy?
Or are you just there to make one wonder,
and have courage?
Oh dark, dark night, why are you there?
Oh dark, dark night.

--Dawson Rutledge, Age 9, Lane County, Oregon


PARTNER POEM

THE SHADOW INSIDE ME
 
Night has driven the shadow
into my own body.  It's an inward
robe that stretches its arms
 
and legs into my limbs, whispers
like silk along my spine,
turns darker and darker until it
 
finally comes off in me as the color
of sleep, behind whose eyelids
two black flames are flickering.

--Tommy Olofsson, Sweden (translated by Jean Pearson)


ASK THE POEM
(Imagine what the poem might say/write if you asked…)

1. What do poems do in the dark while humans are sleeping?
2. When has the darkness of night helped you? How might it help you in the future?
3. If you could invite night-time and day-time over to your house to play, what games would they choose? Who do you think would win?
4. What other creatures (real or imaginary) might become stronger or more comfortable at night? How would they show this?
5. Why do you think night exists and what would happen inside of you if it suddenly stopped?


 Fall 08 Poetry Posts THE JUNKYARD OF FORGOTTEN TREASURES
 
In the junkyard of forgotten treasures
a bird's nest lay calmly, waiting
waiting for a bird to rest on its twigs.
A picture of two men in berets
sits lonely, worn by rain.
Church bells lay hopelessly,
silently pleading to be rung.
A cardboard box
that's never been used
lays underneath something broken.
Smoke billows from the fire,
a fire that never burns out.
A delivery truck
comes every day
and throws in more wasted treasure
from an old photo of cliff divers
to a diamond ring,
from a book that's never been read,
to an old bottle
that was thrown away,
its juice still inside.

-Ashley Babcock
Age 11, Lane County, Oregon


PARTNER POEM

MRS. LYONS
 
She could untie the dawn, Mrs. Lyons,
and out would come a bird born
 
in a cardboard box or an orange
that unpeels itself.  She kept in her red
 
breast pocket a postcard of cliff
divers in Hawaii and a white nest
 
made of her handkerchief.
Her voice was as old as churchbells,
 
her hair billowing chimney smoke,
her heart and veins little girls
 
jumping rope.  When she looked
at you, you'd see rain
 
penetrating the earth with its
soft voice.  Her hands were two
 
old men talking excitedly in French,
berets riding the world of ideas.
 
This moment is the broken thing,
Mrs. Lyons.
 
Please come back and teach me again
what you once did in 6th grade.

-Rebecca Childers
Lane County, Oregon


ASK THE POEM
1. What is the most valuable treasure a poem can own?
2. Is it possible for something you never see or touch to be the thing you treasure most? How? Why?
3. Can you imagine a new scene including birds, berets and churchbells?
4.  If you could unpeel yourself like an orange or be opened like a book (that's never been read) which would you choose? What would we find inside?
5. How does rain change you? Do you fade, shine, or react in your own unique way?




Spring 08 Poetry Posts 


I Knew a Cloud

 

I knew a cloud when I walked in the cold, wet mist of fog.

It swirled around me laughing.

I watched for a moment, thinking

Should I scream and run inside?

Should I stay and play with it?

Should I stand here and watch?

What should I do?

The snow-white cloud touches its cold mist against my cheek.

It turns it as red as a blossoming cherry.

Soon the cloud swirls high into the sky

and blows itself away with the others.

I watch for a while and then turn and run to catch up with my brother

and walk the rest of the way to school.

I always look for the cloud now and want to know its name.

    

-Kate Henley, age 9

Lane County, Oregon

 


PARTNER POEM for I Knew a Cloud, from The Nature of Clouds

 

There is a cloud on my house.

 

The cloud has arrived in strings and wisps and ringlets.

When I step outside my house, the cloud is on me.

 

What color is the cloud?  Pink and gray.

 

What does the cloud taste like?  Rhododendron.

 

What does the cloud think? Hill.  The cloud thinks about leaving

this hill.  The cloud misses the ocean.

 

When I open my front door, pieces of cloud waft into the house.

The pieces float among sofas and chairs.

 

Now the cloud is stuck inside my house and I am sad for the

cloud.  I open the back door to let it move on.

The rest of the cloud streams through my house.  It touches

papers with its moist breathing.  It swipes against walls and

makes them shine.

    

-Penelope Schott

Portland, Oregon

 


ASK the POEMS for I Knew a Cloud & from The Nature of Clouds


1. Poem, what feelings are you sharing with me?

2. What questions are you asking?

3. How are you mysterious?

4. What if clouds and people changed places?

5. How can people and clouds speak to each other?




Winter 07 Poetry Posts


Hiding


A caterpillar hides his true self and thrilling beauty in a

hiding place. As he hides in a shell, he decides to stop

hiding and bursts out. His true self is a thrilling butterfly.


The seed hides her sweet scent and beauty in a hiding

place. She hides in the ground, coming out little by little

and then she comes out as a sweet smelling pink rose.


Hannah Yi, age 10

Lane County, Oregon


Partner Poem


Out of Hiding


Someone said my name in the garden,


while I grew smaller

in the spreading shadow of the peonies,


grew larger by my absence to another,

grew older among the ants, ancient


under the opening heads of the flowers,

new to myself, and stranger.


When I heard my name again, it sounded far,

like the name of the child next door,

or a favorite cousin visiting for the summer,


while the quiet seemed my true name,

a near and inaudible singing

born of hidden ground.


Quiet to quiet, I called back.

And the birds declared my whereabouts all morning.

Li-Young Lee

Chicago


Ask the Poems


1. Poem, where do you take place?

2. What do you invite me to wonder about?

3. How do you use size and color?

4. Why were you hiding?

5. When no one knows where you are, can you be anything you want?




Fall 07 Poetry Posts


Ode to My Feet



Ode to my feet, my roots to

the ground. My propellers whizzing

me through icy cold pools.

My motors running me down

the street. You may be smelly,

but thank you feet.



--Carly Ferguson, age 10





PARTNER POEM

from Ode to My Socks



Maru Mori brought me

a pair

of socks

knitted with her own

shepherd's hands,

two socks soft

as rabbits.

I slipped

my feet into them

as if

into

jewel cases

woven

with threads of

dusk

and sheep's wool.



Audacious socks,

my feet became

two woolen

fish,

two long sharks

of lapis blue

shot

with a golden thread,

two mammoth blackbirds,

two cannons,

thus honored

were

my

feet

by

these

celestial

socks.



--Pablo Neruda


ASK the POEMS

1. Poem, what makes you an ode?

2. What kinds of comparisons do you make?

3. Are you a serious poem? How do you show me that?

4. How do your hands connect you to the world around you?

5. What is the next step you will take?





Spring 07 Poetry Posts



Running Away



When my friend Hannah and I were four we decided to run away.



In her sister’s red wagon we put a dress, four dollars that we took from a bowl in the kitchen, an old pie tin full of mud that we stuck daisies in, an old tablecloth and a yoyo.



Hannah lived really close to Prince Pucklers so we could run away there.



We put on our shoes and started walking, stopping a couple of times to put things back in the wagon as they fell out.



When we got to Prince Pucklers, we bought ice cream from a surprised employee.



On the way back to my friend’s house we pretended to camp on the grass next to the sidewalk.



Running away was immensely fun and since we were only four we thought we actually ran away even though it was only for a half an hour.



--Madeleine Peara, 5th Grade, Lane County, Oregon



A Clearing



What lies at the end of enticing

country driveways, curving

off among trees? Often only

a car graveyard, a house-trailer,

a trashy bungalow. But this one,

for once, brings you

through the shade of its green tunnel

to a paradise of cedars,

of lawns mown but not too closely,

of iris, moss, fern, rivers of stone rounded

by sea or stream,

of a wooden unassertive large-windowed house.

The big trees enclose

an expanse of sky, trees and sky

together protect the clearing.

One is sheltered here

from the assaultive world

as if escaped from it, and yet

once arrived, is given (oneself

and others being a part of that world)

a generous welcome.

It's a paradise

as a paradigm for how

to live on earth,

how to be private and open

quiet and richly eloquent.

Everything man-made here

was truly made by the hands

of those who live here, of those

who live with what they have made.

It took time, and is growing still

because it's alive.

It is a paradise, and paradise

is a kind of poem; it has

a poem's characteristics:

inspiration; starting with the given;

unexpected harmonies; revelations.

It's rare among

the worlds one finds

at the end of enticing driveways.



--Denise Levertov



Questions to ask the poems:

1. What are other paradises?

2. When you come home after your journey, is home where you left it?

3. Do places change you, or do you change places?

4. What is the taste on your tongue?

5. How long can you stop before you start again?




This Poetry Post was produced through a partnership between the Young Writers Association and the Lane Education Service District.


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